B7 - Greenwood

[altariel.livejournal.com]

B2MeM Challenge: Poetic forms: haiku; March 3019 TA: March 15th - Battle under the trees in Mirkwood.
Format: Haiku
Genre: Poetry
Rating: N/A
Warnings: N/A
Characters: Winds, seasons
Pairings: N/A
Summary:
It would be complete-
Ly ridiculous to summ-
Arize a haiku.

Greenwood

For the_wild_iris

The east wind brought them:
Black steel under winter trees.
With the day came spring.

Comments

[cairistiona7.livejournal.com]

Very evocative and chilling! (And kudos for a clever summary!)

[altariel.livejournal.com]

Thank you! - and I'm glad you liked the summary ;-)

[aliana1.livejournal.com]

I love the phrase "black steel under winter trees"--spring is on its way, indeed!

[altariel.livejournal.com]

Thank you! That line took a lot of tinkering. mraltariel helped with this one.

[blslarner.livejournal.com]

I love the implication that on that day that the black steel arrived, the east wind ceased to blow! Excellent!

[altariel.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[grey-wonderer.livejournal.com]

Lovely. I like the image this paints.

[altariel.livejournal.com]

Thank you!