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B2MeM Challenge: I18, Food and Drink in Middle-Earth ("It comes in pints?")
Format: Ficlet
Title: Pints
Genre: Angst
Rating: G/K
Warnings: Mild angst
Characters: Frodo, Pippin
Pairings: N/A
Summary: At the Prancing Pony in Bree, Frodo observes his young cousin and contemplates their situation.



"It comes in pints? I'm getting one!"

Dear Pip. So new everything seems to you, so fresh and strange and wonderful. This is hardly more than an adventure to you, a delightful game in which every new experience should be savored, not feared, a merry caper which will inevitably turn out beautifully in the end.

How can I bear to tell you that such a favourable outcome is unlikely, that like as not we will none of us emerge unscathed, if indeed we come out alive at all? I can hardly bear to think of our quest myself. I can only hope that Gandalf will meet us after all, and that all will be well once he is with us.

But I fear for us, Pippin. I fear for us all...and somehow, I fear most of all for you, who know so little of trouble.

I don't want to see you grow up too soon.

-the end-



B2MeM Challenge: I18, Life Events (Old Age)
Format: Ficlet
Title: Aged
Genre: Angst
Rating: G/K
Warnings: Mild angst
Characters: Bilbo, Frodo
Pairings: N/A
Summary: The first autumn after the Quest's completion, Bilbo muses on his own advanced age...and his nephew's fate.



One hundred and twenty-nine years is not an inconsiderable sum. And yet I would not for all the world live all my years over - some, yes, but not this past year of dreadful watching and waiting and worrying.

But you, Frodo my lad - you seem older even than I, as young as you are, scarcely past fifty, and still carrying the weight of the world upon your shoulders even though our Ring is gone. What can I do to ease your burdened spirit? Gladly would I share my years with you, for I fear your time will be short unless you choose to accept the Queen's gift, which I hope you will, for I will go, and would cherish your company. I am old, and weary of Middle-earth - as, too, I perceive you to be, for all you have passed less time in the world than I.

Would that your years could have been as joyful and light-hearted as mine, dear boy. Would that I could change the past and undo what has been done. But I cannot, so sit here at my side, with food and drink and merriment to share, and try to forget.

Please, Frodo. Please try.

-the end-

Date: 2012-03-01 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
These were great responses to the prompts. I admire your speed!

Date: 2012-03-01 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huinare.livejournal.com
What speedy and empathetic uses of the prompts. I don't read much hobbity fic, so I like short things like these that can give memorable glimpses into their minds.

Date: 2012-03-01 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrowe.livejournal.com
Especially the second one rings very true. You're off to a good start:-)

Date: 2012-03-01 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dwimordene-2011.livejournal.com
Would that your years could have been as joyful and light-hearted as mine, dear boy. Would that I could change the past and undo what has been done. But I cannot, so sit here at my side, with food and drink and merriment to share, and try to forget.

Killer lines - I love that Bilbo is struggling with how impossible it is to forget, and yet how necessary some form of forgetting will be for Frodo.

Date: 2012-03-01 02:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com
I think these are wonderful. Full of such deep emotions and difficult thoughts. Wonderful use of the prompts.

Date: 2012-03-01 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
These were both just perfect! I love the care that both Frodo, and then Bilbo have for others. I like Frodo's impression of Pippin and his concern. It would be so like him to worry about all of the other members in his party. I also enjoyed Bilbo wishing he could do something for Frodo to help him. Bravo on both stories!

Date: 2012-03-02 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starli-ght.livejournal.com
These were awesome! I really think you have gone straight to the core of both Frodo and Pippin's characters with these delightful drabbles. Life changes everyone, doesn't it? I like to think that that is not always a bad thing, and that things work out how they're supposed to. Nice job!

Date: 2012-03-02 05:03 am (UTC)
dreamflower: gandalf at bag end (Default)
From: [personal profile] dreamflower
Oh both of these are so poignant! But I especially love the second one!

Date: 2012-03-02 10:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
Oh, how poignant, both of them! Love what appears to be Frodo's POV in the first, and the second is perfect from Bilbo's! Just perfect!

Date: 2012-04-01 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] havamahal.livejournal.com
But you, Frodo my lad - you seem older even than I, as young as you are, scarcely past fifty, and still carrying the weight of the world upon your shoulders even though our Ring is gone.

What a perfect line.

The second one is especially lovely. I like the parallels between the two stories - Frodo is worried for Pip and Bilbo for Frodo, but both of them regret the loss of their innocence. Nicely done!

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