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B2MeM Challenge: The Steward and His Sons, B13: Second Son; Poetic Forms, G59: cinquain
Format: Poetry (paired cinquains)
Genre: gen
Rating: G
Warnings: sad
Characters: Faramir, Boromir implied
Pairings: none
Summary: A brother’s farewell.

To Boromir

When I
Ran after you,
You laughed and welcomed me –-
Now I call your name, and you lie
Silent.

How dear
That one last sight,
My brother, of your boat
Held a moment on the water
And gone.

Date: 2012-03-29 02:23 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-03-29 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mikononyte.livejournal.com
Yes, sad and beautiful.
Thank you.

Date: 2012-03-29 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
How well you express the tenderness of the bereft, mourning Faramir here!

Date: 2012-03-30 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
THis was very moving

Date: 2012-03-31 02:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
Oh, I really liked this.

- Erulisse (one L)

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