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B2MeM Challenge: Like a fearful Faramir
Format: Ficlet
Genre: Deathfic
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character deaths
Characters: Faramir, others
Pairings:
Creators' Notes (optional):
Summary: With his father and brother going into great danger, Faramir couldn’t possibly be left behind – no matter how afraid he is to go forth.


“Brother, surely you cannot mean to leave me behind! It was I who received the message,” Faramir protested, even as they clasped hands in farewell. “Surely you realise this is madness. With you and Father both gone, who will rule the City?”

“You, of course, Faramir,” came the calm, somewhat surprised reply. “You are more than capable. You know this. I am Captain-General of Gondor, brother – I must ride at Father’s side. Our enemy’s strength is great; he would have me with him as we fight to defend our country together. And if there is aid to be found, surely Father and I together will find it.”

Mir,” he found himself whispering, switching to flawless Sindarin though his voice shook. “Muindor, please, let me come with you – I am afraid if you go, I will never see you again. Never see you or Ada again.”

“We will find each other again, muindor dithen.”

“Come, my son, we must make haste. Faramir, go back inside.” His father sounded worried, impatient, but overall stern. “You will rule in my place as Steward until my return. Now go, keep the Citadel for us. I have faith in you. Do not break my trust.”

“Yes, Father,” Faramir whispered. Nevertheless, he watched until their horses were out of sight, surrounded by guards. They were not riding to war just yet, after all – merely seeking aid and an answer.

He looked East, and shuddered. War would fall soon enough.

Days passed; a week, perhaps two. No sign of them, but portents of war had come at last. Finally, he had enough.

He summoned Pelendur, his father’s chief counsellor, and asked for his horse and provisions. “I ride to find our lords,” he said grimly, when Pelendur had given him all he asked for.

“Who will rule until your return?” Pelendur asked as Faramir pulled on a stained green cloak, the hood covering his dark hair well. Faramir handed him a ring of keys.

“Keep the city well, my lord – and if all else fails, look to the North for aid.” He rode swiftly for the plains of the Morannon, where he felt he would find an end to his quest.

Along the path, he fell in with the Horse-folk, as he thought he would; they were retreating from the plain of the Morannon, attempting to rejoin their Gondorian allies in the battle. He spurred his horse on in time to see the King of Gondor fall.

Father!” Terrified, Faramir broke away and fought his way through the warriors, striking out with his sword until his path was clear. When he finally knelt beside Ondoher’s broken body, he found it covering another – his beloved brother.

Artamir…

“No! Artamir, no…” Faramir cried, and his fear, his grief, turned to fury. Every last one of these Wainriders would die, he resolved in that moment. The Éothéod defended Faramir as best they could, but eventually the line was broken.

Silver horns sounded in the distance. The banners of Prince Adrahil flew over the field. Gondor would have aid – too late.

Faramir, son of Ondoher, was slain ere the Prince's knights ever joined the battle – and the struggle for Gondor’s crown had begun.

Date: 2016-03-25 11:03 pm (UTC)
shirebound: (Default)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
Oh, you took me by surprise, there! Well done.

Date: 2016-03-25 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com
That is indeed quite a fic! To imagine that Faramir died defending Gondor. That is quite something and i liked how Boromir told Faramir that he would take his place. Its a good AU fic. So powerful and evocative!

Date: 2016-03-25 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com
aww thanks i didn't know about that Faramir-- i guess i can read in the appendices? Please refer where i can read more. :)
I just assumed it was Faramir of the third age.

Date: 2016-03-25 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's still a good fic. :)

Date: 2016-03-25 11:19 pm (UTC)
zdenka: A woman touching open books, with loose pages blowing around her (books)
From: [personal profile] zdenka
A dramatic scene-- and tricksy!

Date: 2016-03-26 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysterious-jedi.livejournal.com
I was so confused. I didn''t realize until the end that you wren't talking about "our" Faramir. Nicely played.

Date: 2016-03-28 06:28 pm (UTC)
hhimring: Estel, inscription by D. Salo (Default)
From: [personal profile] hhimring
I'm afraid the tagging had sort of given your trick away by the time I read this. But I was able to appreciate the cleverness of it anyway.
Such a tragedy--for poor Faramir, of course, and for all of Gondor.

Date: 2016-04-05 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
I'd wondered which King it was, and I grieved it was Ondoher and his sons. A great grief for Gondor, and Pelendur failed to look to the north as he'd been bidden. Indeed, a time of strife that ought not to have happened.

Date: 2016-04-21 12:28 am (UTC)
nialoke: Small, blue-greenish dragon reading a book (Default)
From: [personal profile] nialoke
Oh dear! You had me so confused for a moment XD
Great story!

Date: 2021-03-21 09:17 am (UTC)
narya_flame: Young woman drinking aperol in Venice (Default)
From: [personal profile] narya_flame
Oh, I like this very much!

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